So this is the rough outline of the first chapters of my book. I do a few things and am curious if it sounds good on paper. Prologue: introduction to Lumi (main character) as a child. He is exploring his house and finds an old tablet in the library. The tablet is a strange cipher. His mother nurse approaches him and tells Lumi that the text is forbidden to read. The tablet is a piece of a puzzle of what happened to your world; why the world is in constant night. The secret is dangerous and it is up to Lumi’s family to keep it a secret, no matter what. (Notes: Lumi is part of a psychic family of spies. And Lumi uses her power once, but not many details about her power are given yet.) Chapter 1: A new character, Katherine Cogwright, is this man’s point of view. chapter. She is explaining a mysterious organ in the brain that allows people to have psychic powers. There are not many students in the room and those in there are disappointed that the class is not about becoming psychic, but about the study of the mysterious organ itself. One of the students who is interested is Lumi (undercover). The two can be linked on the subject. Chapter 1 or 2: Two years later. Katherine’s POV: She’s on the run due to her research findings. She leaves her house and meets Lumi at the train station. Katherine, trusting him at the moment, shares her research findings with him. Her research is revealed to have been taken from one of those strange tablets I mentioned earlier. Basically, you sent your investigation to a city and it could be dangerous. Due to the occupation of Lumi, he kills Katherine and burns her research. The next stage of Lumi’s mission is to erase everything in the city related to Katherine’s investigation to preserve the secret. What I need to think about: 1) the twist here is that Lumi is a secret agent who betrays Katherine and then becomes the protagonist. Having Katherine as your point of view for 1 or 2 chapters would rob the reader of Lumi’s voice, but it could be a nice twist. Or would it be better for readers to know that betrayal is coming so that the protagonist develops further from the beginning? 2) Lumi kills and betrays an innocent woman. Yes, Katherine knew her research was illegal, but she believed the research was vital to future progress. This would paint Lumi in a negative light, especially since I spent a chapter or two with her. I want Lumi to be morally gray, but I don’t want her to look like a villain. How can I do that? It’s hard to accurately gauge all of my thoughts without reading it, but I just wanted to test the waters before I started writing. I am an architect, not a gardener. Anyway, thanks for reading this far!
So this is the rough outline of the first chapters of my book. I do a few things and am curious if it sounds good on paper. Prologue: introduction to Lumi (main character) as a child. He is exploring his house and finds an old tablet in the library. The tablet is a strange cipher. His mother nurse approaches him and tells Lumi that the text is forbidden to read. The tablet is a piece of a puzzle of what happened to your world; why the world is in constant night. The secret is dangerous and it is up to Lumi’s family to keep it a secret, no matter what. (Notes: Lumi is part of a psychic family of spies. And Lumi uses her power once, but not many details about her power are given yet.) Chapter 1: A new character, Katherine Cogwright, is this man’s point of view. chapter. She is explaining a mysterious organ in the brain that allows people to have psychic powers. There are not many students in the room and those in there are disappointed that the class is not about becoming psychic, but about the study of the mysterious organ itself. One of the students who is interested is Lumi (undercover). The two can be linked on the subject. Chapter 1 or 2: Two years later. Katherine’s POV: She’s on the run due to her research findings. She leaves her house and meets Lumi at the train station. Katherine, trusting him at the moment, shares her research findings with him. Her research is revealed to have been taken from one of those strange tablets I mentioned earlier. Basically, you sent your investigation to a city and it could be dangerous. Due to the occupation of Lumi, he kills Katherine and burns her research. The next stage of Lumi’s mission is to erase everything in the city related to Katherine’s investigation to preserve the secret. What I need to think about: 1) the twist here is that Lumi is a secret agent who betrays Katherine and then becomes the protagonist. Having Katherine as your point of view for 1 or 2 chapters would rob the reader of Lumi’s voice, but it could be a nice twist. Or would it be better for readers to know that betrayal is coming so that the protagonist develops further from the beginning? 2) Lumi kills and betrays an innocent woman. Yes, Katherine knew her research was illegal, but she believed the research was vital to future progress. This would paint Lumi in a negative light, especially since I spent a chapter or two with her. I want Lumi to be morally gray, but I don’t want her to look like a villain. How can I do that? It’s hard to accurately gauge all of my thoughts without reading it, but I just wanted to test the waters before I started writing. I am an architect, not a gardener. Anyway, thanks for reading this far!
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